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Kia ora. My name is Dehstinee and I attend Mangapapa school in Gisborne, Tairāwhiti. I love how you like mostly the same stuff as myself. I also like helping animals and I also want to learn about math. It's also one of my favorite subjects. Something you can work on is the words you used instead of “My most loved Ice cream is lime” You could have said “ My favorite Ice cream is lime because I eat it alot, after school.
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Kia ora. My name is Dehstinee and I attend Mangapapa school in Gisborne, Tairāwhiti. I love how you like mostly the same stuff as myself. I also like helping animals and I also want to learn about math. It's also one of my favorite subjects. Something you can work on is the words you used instead of “My most loved Ice cream is lime” You could have said “ My favorite Ice cream is lime because I eat it alot, after school.
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